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Read MoreIt is not your job to fix meYou were not the one who broke meDeath has a number and coming for meYou need to walk away you cannot fix me I walked into the room and noticed youAnger and rage...
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Thank you, Daniel. Maybe there is. Will the Angel or the Devil win? Hmm, that is the question. ;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This write has a lyric vibe my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damin. Lyric feel to it? I love that.;))
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” It is not your job to fix me
You were not the one who broke me ”
Blessings to you…first off.
Much respect to you during your journey through Shadow Work
Your introspection is deeply appreciated
Heavy write indeedNaaj
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Thank you, Naaj. Appreciate it.
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Drieks and
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Read MorePrecious, yet brittle like a fiddle. Delicate, frail, alas cracked in the middle. Riddled by plagues, plagued by a riddle. Critically acclaimed yet worshipped by little.Pill popper's delight. Stage fright amongst a plethora of other might be reason why...
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Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…
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Thank you for reading/listening!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian!
I’m so happy you like it! 🙏🏻
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This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.
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Thank you so much Fia!
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Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”You have some great lines in this piece.
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Thank you so much DK ❤️
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You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.
John
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hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕
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Your poetry captures so much in just a few stanza’s. Your words are beautiful and heartbreaking. Nice tribute to your son Brenda. xoxo
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hello dearest Keith thank you for the love here it’s felt 💕
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What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕
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I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
Jade xox-
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hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…
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Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕
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We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.Your son will always be with you.
He had a beautiful smile.Condolences and remembrances Brenda
I feel you
🖤💙💓🤠
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hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreYou know, back in the day I love me some young men I was willowy, I was spring, Damn I was May I was down to trying every position conceivable Hormones were rampant The body and spirit were ready, willing, and able As work starts...
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Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.
John
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Thank you, John. As long as you feel it deep down, then I did it right. lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I try to raise the heat when I can. ;))
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” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear
A practiced tone
That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”
Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.
Nicely written
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj😊
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I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.
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Thank you, Sam., You do the whisper thing? Nice;))
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The title hooked me in. This journey begins at the end, I hope there is a follow up poem, Fia. Enjoyed this piece.