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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Read MoreYou suffocate me with your sweet lies They hope that every honey suckle word that drips from your lips is truth Buying into the soft grave that has been dug out for them Instead, it feeds into their naivete Relishing the feel of...
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Tick tock
Great write Fia.
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😄 thank you Peter
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. This one gives me a sense of Deja Vu. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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The clock is always ticking. Never stops at all, until were dead. Great write!!
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You are right, Keith. Thank you
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Read MoreIt is not your job to fix meYou were not the one who broke meDeath has a number and coming for meYou need to walk away you cannot fix me I walked into the room and noticed youAnger and rage...
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The title hooked me in. This journey begins at the end, I hope there is a follow up poem, Fia. Enjoyed this piece.
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Thank you, Daniel. Maybe there is. Will the Angel or the Devil win? Hmm, that is the question. ;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This write has a lyric vibe my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damin. Lyric feel to it? I love that.;))
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” It is not your job to fix me
You were not the one who broke me ”
Blessings to you…first off.
Much respect to you during your journey through Shadow Work
Your introspection is deeply appreciated
Heavy write indeedNaaj
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Thank you, Naaj. Appreciate it.
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Drieks and
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian