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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Peace not Granted
Oh come to me sacred peace
Unknowingly they participated
Volumes reaching levels unprecedentedOh, come to me in sweet silence
For one more vowel of consonant spoken
I will meet the judge and juryI see my end near…
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Read MoreOh come to me sacred peaceUnknowingly they participatedVolumes reaching levels unprecedented Oh, come to me in sweet silenceFor one more vowel or consonant spokenI will meet the judge and jury I see my end near…
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Thank you Crimsin;)
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. That’s quite a headache. Hope you get to feeling better.. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Yes it was. It went away;)
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Fia….I do hope you are ok and just a little melancholic, which is normal.Those that write are often a little fogged.
Powerful short write and full of questions.🙏
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Thank you Peter. I am okay really. Had a bad headache.
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This was beautiful and haunting.
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Thank you Brandon;)
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Yes, peace is sacred, and often underestimated. This is a hauntingly dark and beautiful poem, dear Fiia!
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Thank you Sappho;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Complicated
When the night is still young
The moon has not fully come out to chase the sun away
My heartbeat begins a new rhythm
Smell of honey and cream in the air
Slow music played in the heat of seduction
Tonight I am prepared to treat you a cherished jewel
Not anyone will receive this
Your not just anyone and you know…Read More
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Read MoreWhen the night is still young The moon has not fully come out to chase the sun away My heartbeat begins a new rhythm Smell of honey and cream in the air Slow music played in the heat of seduction Tonight I am prepared...
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wow lovely one this write really made feel this is deep ❤️
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Thank you, Crimsin;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of depth my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Great piece Fia. Nicely said.
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Thank you Vision;))
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Complicated is the perfect word, I think
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Thank you Willow. Sometimes you want simple but…complications
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I like this stanza “I’m cautious in my approach, with proper reverence given to the forces greater than I” I enjoyed this Crimsin
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hello lovely Fia thank you graciously I wasn’t sure how this would be received sometimes I get way out there lol ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A beautiful write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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hello beautiful Fia I hope the end isn’t as close as you think I feel that way of late myself deep write ❤️