-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Drieks wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreBlood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...
7 Comments-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you Willow 🙏🏻
Your words truly mean a lot to me.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
-
![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
Just wow!!-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much Adelphina! It really means a lot to me.
-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.❤️
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
-
-
![Profile picture of goldenmyst]()
Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie and
NAVINA are now friends
![]()
![Profile Photo]()
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Fia Naturie wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreWhen a calm sky turns grey And a whispered wind cuts When the peace you need to stay But vanishes like dust Every beauty on a rose Is kissed with lust The roots never grow Past the decayed crust Word sung in a resounding hymn Played with notes Eco'd...
20 Comments-
![Profile picture of Sam Nash]()
OMG…. This is one of your very very best
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Sam😊
-
![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
This is an amazing poem, dear Fía!
Abracadabra: As I speak I create!-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you Sappho.😊
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Detritus]()
Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.
Clay
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you,Clay 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Cipher]()
Nicely done Fia…
Powerful excursion…
<#3 Cipher
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Cipher 😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Jim😊
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you ,Damian ☺️
-
-
![Profile picture of Tim]()
A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Tim;))
-
-
![Profile picture of Willow]()
This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Willow;))
-
-
![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.
Wonderful ink.
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Nick. I love Poe’s work
-
-
![Profile picture of Neville]()
Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Neville;))
-
-
-
- Load More Posts
This has a surreal aspect to it. The iron tasting like memory is brilliant. Mind sees blood