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Amethyste wrote a new post

• 9 months, 4 weeks ago

Together

Poetry

December 5, 2025

2

I wonder what you are doing nowAre you getting boredLike I am nowYou in the hostelAnd I here in the barIn the middle of the nightIt would be less lonelyIf we were together.

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. Your style feels like observational wisdom at its finest. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Amethyste
    9 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thank you for reading it Damian. I appreciate that.
twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 9 months, 4 weeks ago

bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.

endless night confession

breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchange

you were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More

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3 Comments
- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
  
  Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
  
  Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
  - twofiftythree
    9 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
    - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
      9 months, 4 weeks ago
      
      Ha-hahhhh!
      
      That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
Liziantus-Marantus wrote a new post

• 9 months, 4 weeks ago

His Hair

Poetry, Romance, Short Stories

December 5, 2025

0

His hair is charcoal,pitch black.His hair is shiny and not matte.They say if you look upclose. You'll find the sparkling galaxy.Above with the suns,stars and planets.I know that in his hair landscape is also a moon. That glows brightly and won't...

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Amethyste wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

Fire

Poetry

December 4, 2025

2

Talk to meA word from youLights up a fireOn this winter day.

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Amethyste
    9 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damian. A good day ahead for you.
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

Falling Robe

Poetry

December 4, 2025

6

She dropped her robe.Naked and defenceless,she stood theredaring meto say something,to do something.But I couldn’t.I was rendered mute and immobileby the beauty before me.My eyes drank in everything,and my mind raced,pulling me backto another momentthe first timeher robe fell...

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5 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  10 months ago
  
  Now that is want and reverence to the beauty of the female body. Nicely done
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks Fia
    
    All women are beautiful just some more than others.😜💋
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Peter. This is truly a glorious write my friend and I agree with you wholeheartedly. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Atticus Abbey
  9 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  The hips of passing years This is a gooder.
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    9 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks for the comment Atticus.
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