You had us thinking with this one dude. We was thinking maybe a monster with the kick out but leaving the door open but there is some real life here. Tight

You left me addicted! Harriet-Jacqui xx

Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling per usual my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Chère F.,
Lovely to see you have posted again.

And, while my tongue seems to have a will of its own, who needs Valentine if we can have this?

Also poem-wise, I’m hungry for more!
Warm regards, Gus

This is a very well told story, dear Fía. It awakens the curiosity of your readers and keep it up. I can hardly wait to read the sequel!

Hahaha, tis is so real and we’re thinking you incorporated some truth in this, tight one Lady

Kind of story I come back from sun basking in Gran Canaria for! Superb writing, Fia, and much enjoyed.

Heart-warming and affectionate piece.

Emotionally unraveling throughout.

I’m glad it had a sweet, happy ending.

I had a feeling that disaster might strike, but instead all safe and well. x