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Read MoreThis dawnlight spills on grasslands wide and bare,While elephants move slow through morning haze,Mount Kenya stands in silent, stony praise—A god of stone, unmoved by human care.My thoughts, like dust, were drifting in the air,No compass fixed, no voice...
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Read MoreSlipping on a banana peel total disgrace Southbound rocket is drifting out at sea Tragedy crawling across his wicked face Cruel intentions for those who disagree Violent whispers in a radioactive breeze Digital parasites corrupt a fragile mind Pigheaded fascist spreading his disease Day of the...
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Interesting theory. It is all empires fall. They have to be built up to crumble. Nice
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you liked the read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Cool motto. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Love that song. Simon & Garfunkel are awesome, Paul Simon is a brilliant lyricist and songwriter. I love ” I Am A Rock.” Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIn your depths, I am a shadow soullicking at a flame I can't fathomFate is cruel and did not allow My passion quelled out of necessityProvocation denied and repressedYou graze my sexual soulprovoking my lustbuilding it until bare, I squirm My...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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My crime, tempting to read your work, Brenda. Lovely poetess and love the title. Bravo!
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thank you graciously I love you comment Daniel 💕
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thank you graciously beautiful one 💕
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Lyrics of wisdom…
Check spelling on ‘strength’ first line and ‘through’ in the 3rd stanza.
Your meter for this piece is strong, the primary poetic element. It is assertive and authoritative.-
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Thank you for correcting the spelling! I appreciate it ⚘️
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Beautifully penned, Jade. This was a wise and uplifting read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian⚘️
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💜⚘️
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An insightful write! Well done “)
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Thank you for your kind words! ⚘️
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Great insight. Totally diggin this vibe
Naaj
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Thank you kindly ⚘️
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Great flow.. Thank you for sharing.