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Read MoreIf I had to think of when we first metAll I can think of is the darknessThe waking hours are my sanctuaryYou invaded the sanctuaryYou’ve never said a wordI just knew when you were thereAll of my fight was...
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Thank you, Sappho. appreciate that;))
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![Profile picture of M.E]()
A well written poem that reminds me of all those near death experiences I got on 07:00 am.
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Thank you M.E
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Cool piece. Well said & executed. Sleep well zzzzzzz
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Thank you, Keith;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Forever it will be bookmarked! What do you think? Does it have the same punch as my old catchphrase? lol. Seriously though great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh, this is great! That last stanza is like an echoing question mark
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Thank you so much Willow!
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❤️❤️❤️
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
This is awesome. Nicely said and executed marvelously.
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![Profile picture of Cipher]()
Wonderful wordplay Drieks…
Awesome audio…
That is such a cool site feature…
– Cipher
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Thank you so much Cipher.
Yeah it’s awesome they have this feature. Hoping to bring out more music on here soon.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Masterfully penned, Drieks. Great flow and fantastic wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Your words bring warmth to my heart as they always do.
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You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
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![Profile picture of Cipher]()
I like the way the commas
hold the piece together…While the line breaks
moderate the rhythm…Nice metapoetics…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great idea to address sleep personally, dear Fia! Your deep reflections are touching and very well written!