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hello dearest John thank you he was a part my heart and he was so young to go he will be missed 💕
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Your poetry captures so much in just a few stanza’s. Your words are beautiful and heartbreaking. Nice tribute to your son Brenda. xoxo
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hello dearest Keith thank you for the love here it’s felt 💕
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What a beautifully expressed tribute, Brenda
Much respect
Naaj
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hello dearest Naajir you would have liked him I believe he was a lot of fun thank you for the love 💕
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I feel this one in my bones…As a mom, I know dam well that no amount of writing can take away the pain…Having that said, this is beautifully written and it gives hope that while appart, you are still connected…
Jade xox-
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hello beautiful Jade thank you for the love here no writing is a help but I fear the emotions that keep rising 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely tribute my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for the love 💕 it’s appreciated…
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Write it out, Brenda. You honor him with your love. Write it out ❤️
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hello beautiful Willow thank you for the love I feel like he doesn’t want me to be sad and I want to write and I did today but I know no matter what write the sadness is going to come forth I deeply appreciate you 💕
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We all are connected to those who leave us in death.
I still feel my father on my shoulder when I need guidance and my mom was right about everything. Both gone, but live in my heart.Your son will always be with you.
He had a beautiful smile.Condolences and remembrances Brenda
I feel you
🖤💙💓🤠
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hello dearest Poet good morning I think so too that we are connected I can hear him talking to me and I feel him close he is on to a new life but doesn’t want me to be sad thank you for the love here 💕
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Jade this is a bonfire of passionate poetry. You have created a love poem of depth and beauty that swept me away as I read.
John
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Thank you kindly for your comments John, I’m glad you felt this way while reading it.
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Passionately penned, Jade. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m happy you appreciated it Damian! ⚘️
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A piece of poetry that is beautifully constructed & wonderfully expressed. Nice work.
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Thank you Visions, I appreciate your comments ⚘️
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This is a very sensual and steam piece of work, Jade.
Intense and exceptional. Very nice!!-
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Thank you Naajir! I tend to feel deeply..
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Read MoreI am always as dark as my inkborn in a most distant ageas alluring as I am sageliving my life on death's brinkUsing this wicked smilejust to get what I wantable to tease then tauntwith a most lethal beguileFor...
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Posted the wrong poem… ooops
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Oh my friend, you are the Goddess of this genre. I love the subtle flavor of this as I read and could see it all vividly in my mind’s eye. Like a vision of beauty and passion in which you leave your mark on him. That indelible sign of a night he will remember and be marked by forever.
John
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Beautifully penned, LDF. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes! I agree, let’s make sure those we love know how much we treasure them, while there is time.
Admittedly I struggled to read this through. The emotion is so incredibly palpable here, each word a pang of familiar grief.
If this is a personal loss for you – condolences , myfriend.
Clay
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hello Clay thank you it was my son of thirty six that is him in the picture I’m very sad that is the last statement to us all he is going to make please forgive me 💕
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Heartbreaking…
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thank you for being here dearest Keith 💕
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A thought shared by all for someone. 🌼
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thank you dearest Joe hugs 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. A mother’s love is unconditional my friend. Truly am sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love 💕
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Read MoreIt begins—not with a word—but a winnowing of silence.An inkling.This hush before quill bleedsonto the parchment.The ink drop dangles,glistens in my candlelight.A golden glimmer on a black drop. That is all it takes.As doubt ripples, certainty dissolves,while the poetry spills. I...
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Superb! Self reflection?
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Sometimes… thanks for the read and support…
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The crafting of your tell was a beautifully wrought word smithing. 🌼
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Brilliantly penned, LDF. An amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You take your grief and spill it into a poem of great remembrance and timeless ache for this soul who apparently left this earth all too soon. Lyrically beautiful and soulful vision of what he meant to you and how you heal from loss. Love this poem.
John