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S. Libellule wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Delve

Poetry

May 13, 2025

5

Never one for mere books on shelves,I've always been one who delves,ever deeper here inside,where poetry and secrets hide. Weaving words meant to last,I braid present, future, and pastin a mélange meant to endure,capturing echoes forever pure. So that I may...

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4 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You know, if you read this poem quickly, it gives me the impression that she had to get it out because something imminent is about to happen. Good spill
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Wonderfully executed. Nice work.
- Cipher
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I like the way the commas
  hold the piece together…
  
  While the line breaks
  moderate the rhythm…
  
  Nice metapoetics…
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, LDF. Love the flow. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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• 1 year, 3 months ago

Canons of Iconoclasm

Poetry

May 13, 2025

5

ICannon upon canon of societal demandsTaking a stand to reconfigure the figureRecompute figures, formations, calculationsReexamine the mazes of examinationsWhere we became ions, spied-electrifiedSometimes sunshine secretes secrets of shadowsHappily an anomaly - As happy as singing sparrowsThe best thing that...

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5 Comments
- Willow
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I wish I could put this on a reading list. I have yet to get the bookmark to work. Beautifully brilliant, this is
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  This is beautiful, Cipher. The bookmark will be working later today and you’ll be in it.;))
- Cipher
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you Fia and Willow…
  
  <#3
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Cipher. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Cipher
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian..!
    
    <#3
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Lost souls rejoicing

Poetry

May 13, 2025

11

Here we are at the nighmare paradeafter hours you hear cries in the nightthe shadows fall as you witness ghosts of the midwayliving dolls steal your soulyou dare to ride the haunted carousel?calliope plays mysteriously in the foregroundthe circus...

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10 Comments
- Willow
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Damn, the last line is like a lid slamming down on a coffin after the rest of the poem. Actually a very valid reminder in this world
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks Willow. Appreciate the kind words.
- Sappho (Elke)
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Wow, this is a wild ride you have taken us on with your poem! Your socially critical observation of this world is brilliantly penned and enjoyable sarcastic!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Always sarcasm Sappho. Good to see you here.
- Poetic Gawdess
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Oof! What a haunting vision you’ve painted us with mere words, Vision.
  
  I LOVE IT! xx
  ~P.G💋
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Hello P.G Thanks for the kind words and feedback.
    - Poetic Gawdess
      1 year, 3 months ago
      
      Always a pleasure dear. xx
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks Adira. Great to hear from you.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. This one has grit, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Appreciate the comments Damian. Thanks!!
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