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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
xoxo
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
xoxo
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
xoxoxo
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
xoxo
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Read MoreNebula Orgasm He’s here..I let him into my galaxyso far gone is the gravityas my soul begins to separate from my body..Feeling a rush of sedationas he slowly, so slowlydives into my orbit,showing admiration for my stars, in all their...
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Amazing and Brilliant metaphorical magnificence! BRAVO! Absolutely stunning piece! I am totally in awe. A seductive masterpiece! Wow! Wow! Wow!
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Dampkitten, you are too kind! Thank you so so much, I truly appreciate it. xoxo
~P.G💋
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I couldn’t read it without ET song playing in my head. Lol
Galactic pleasures are always the best!
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Lmao damn, I didn’t think of that. But apparently he doesn’t know the dangers of the black hole, he’ll find out soon enough. 😉 xx
~P.G💋
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Vision, thank you ☺️ xx
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Into the book it belongs! This is passionately written my friend. Love the flow between classic erotica & almost completely diving into the more dirty stuff. It’s well balanced, a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate you, Damian. Thank you for your kind comment xx
~P.G💋
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Huge fan of metaphysical erotica.
Keep it goin’ PG!!Naaj
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Naaj, I thank you! I am also a fan of the metaphysical, especially the erotica. Much Love, xx
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HJ, it is an honor. Thank you xx
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I liked this. Now I’m seeing stars 🌟 haha
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That’s the goal, Daniel. Thank you! xx
~P.G💋
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Read MoreDeep with inA soundEscaped!Catching the airShock and aweCreated the first audienceForwardSymbols and representationsCaptured thoughtOn walls and clayForwardLife ripped from rootsFibrous parchmentCharcoal wordsKnowledgeForwardQuill and inkThin papyrusLines replace symbolsLoops entice the eyesForwardScreens and buttonsGreen and yellowFlashing cursiveForwardTexts, short formsMeanings misunderstoodNew vocabularyEver...
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Right, never go backward. Thank you, Keith
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Thank you, Dragon-fire. I want to know what’s next.
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This makes me want to chase down a Woolly Mammoth and scribble my initials on his testicles.
“We didn’t start the fire!
It was always burning
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Girl, you hit me up with Billy Joel? Love that song. Dk you know I am 4’11”? I will need an extension later to reach mammoth testicles. You are a little taller than me. You will have to climb on my shoulders. lol
You are funny. Thank you, Dk., xoxo
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Love the flow and the imagery is stellar my friend. Nice spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you ☺️ appreciate that Damian
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Fia, our world is ever evolving, but it’s refreshing to have you take us through time. Can’t wait to see what’ll come next. Brilliant piece my dear friend. xx
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Thank you P.G. Let us see what’s next
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Read MoreIBlack hierophant of the spiral pathWalking right pastThose who scoff and laughRight past – The world’s wrath of the world’s ratsThese words upon those formsso thatThey-may:Transform. Followingthe flowingofThese stormsIICrystalline womb fromwhenceIWas bornintoThis form. UnravelinginTravels – TravelingToA crystallineTombIIIThinking backBrainPlacing passed-pastFrameToFrameInto...
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You have the wildest presentations! I like how you use rhyme in your poems.
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Really love the changes in the format, it mirrors transitioning like music does between verses, choruses, bridges, etc. Excellent piece of work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You really set the tone here and painted wicked imagery with this. So much that I have goose flesh from it. Truly a masterpiece, Cipher. Love it! xx
~P.G💋
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