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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

D. Dupont aka Dorothy Khan 1/2

Action & Adventure, Short Stories, Uncategorized

May 30, 2025

2

The door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...

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2 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
Drieks wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Womanizer

Audio & Video, Poetry

May 30, 2025

3

I like to think that I’m the better kind of man.I like to think that I already kinda am.I know I’m not. Hell, not by a long shot.I pretend I am so I don’t end up single again. What is...

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3 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
  
  Nice piece!
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
    A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
    I love exploring my uncharted territory.
ReggiePoet wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

August Moon

Action & Adventure, Historical, Poetry, Romance

May 30, 2025

4

August Moon He hailed from Dartmoor, near the prison townWhile she was born to poor folk on the moorThey chanced upon love’s passion, so profoundAnd met just months before the start of war She knew he was the one, when...

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4 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  The way you open this up I feel I am reading the Mists of Avalone. I like this
- ReggiePoet
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thank you!
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Reggie. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- ReggiePoet
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You are too kind.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Play A Fool

Poetry

May 30, 2025

10

Close my eyes right before the impactStray bullets masked as fake applause Through all the pain my soul still intactFuck being perfect I embrace my flaws Takes more imagination than I possessTo pretend their intentions aren’t cruelInstead of knowing they made...

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10 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  You start out with the bullet. Damn
  This is powerful.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know how to make an entrance or introduction in this case. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Drieks
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  I agree with Fia. Very powerful write Damian.
  Thank you for sharing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Drieks. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You’re welcome. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Ya know, I would love to sit down one day with a cup of coffee, a cat & a fire just to read your entire collection. You never…not once…disappoint, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart such a cool and touching comment. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Alexandria
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Sometimes life is like playing Russian Roulette. There’s truth in this.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It sometimes seems that way, I wish it wasn’t. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  We play Russian Roulette with our lives everyday. Sad but true. Powerful piece my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Unfortunately, that appears to be the case. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 3 months ago

Kafka & Marilyn: A Dialogue Between Shadows

Poetry

May 29, 2025

6

Kafka: I exist in a corridor without doors,where names crumble before they are read.Each face I create dissolves into the mist,like a crime without a defendant, like love without a letter. Marilyn: I exist in the light that never rests,trapped...

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6 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This may be your masterpiece my friend, or perhaps one of many masterpieces in your case. It’s incredible dialogue but their tongues speak poetry, not just casual conversation words. Damn, this was Chef’s Kiss. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thanks for being there my friend. ❤
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  The back-and-forth banter is done well. The use of questioning each other I enjoyed.
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    1 year, 3 months ago
    
    Thank you, appreciate you!
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  The dialogue was great. Your a talent. Well done my friend.
  - PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Viva Keith… I keep waiting for your comments.
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