You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.

Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.

Damian

This piece has become liturgically and surgically well-constructed.
I don’t believe in angels, but they do exist. Thank you all.

PAR you are a great writer. Always pushing the envelope with your poetry. Nice work.

I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
Truly enjoyed

hello beautiful Honoria from us both that is the tone she embodies… so it felt really natural to write this with her… thank you graciously from us both ❤️

great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.

Passionately penned, Brenda & Sky. Excellent collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian