This is a good poetic story.

Eerily penned, Kay. Excellent storytelling and outstanding imagery my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s strange, I set out to write a meditative piece, and my mind took me elsewhere. Thanks for the read …Me

Thank you, Nontoxidart.

Oh, this is good…it’s a story!

That is so true we do have to fight for what we believe in. Very good piece here.

Observing everything right now is like an emotional overload.
So much heartbreak worldwide.
Sometimes fighting gets exhausting but our morals don’t let us rest.
Writing is a sanctuary even in the most unstable of times:)
Great write chica.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with an honest message my friend. I relate to this one as I’m sure many others do as well. Sometimes being a writer (observer) is very exhausting indeed. I always find comfort in knowing because of this community and my fellow brothers and sisters of the pen, I’m never truly alone, and neither are you my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is way beyond sad. She is using drugs and she is being used. Heart hurt on this one. The picture is amazing.

The sad thing about the ‘down girl’ is mostly are under age and do not have that strong family at home to guide and teach them.