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      Road Trip

      It drives me nuts  when I feel it happening.I mean -- it doesn't seem  to matter at the time:I can be shaving  or washing the dishes  or clipping my by-then  two-mile long toenails.Most often,  it happens when I'm driving...

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      • ha-ha, it would have to be next to nuns. 🙂 Time has a way with our minds when there’s only you and a long road, but wondering where time went and the weird things that can go through the mind is rather odd sometimes. I’ve been there. Thankfully I haven’t experienced any torturous itching. 🙂

        Good one. 🙂

        • Thank you, Tim. I’m sure most of us have such such mind farts; that’s good to know.:)

      • “What if I’m Pregnant.” lol okay this had me going.

      • Loved this. Gave me a big smile along with profound thoughts on the journey of life. Well written indeed. Just flowed for me as I read. Very enjoyable road trip along the avenues of time and space.

        John

        • I appreciate the big smile even more than your words (although, of course, those are welcome, too). But smiles almost always come without thought, indicating their trueness — just like their opposites do.

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      Drowner in the Shallow End

      the Player in the pool,envious of deep frolickers. splashy sounds turn heads.momentary nods abide.turned again,bobbers miss the wavethat sweeps the lowthe Player plays naught nowembraces sharky mermaidswho hate the taste of fake meat:  spam that spams the spammer  til he...

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      Ghost Ship

      Ghost ShipBy FlatDaddyI found a shipA mighty thing it wasA massive mast that touched the skyEvery oaken plank self carved  Rigging unspoiled coiled upon the deck,    untrodden,    helm untouched,  Yet, curious, every sail was made    from...

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      • I like the breaks of “and yet” This is great theme for this month, I enjoyed this.

      • Thanks, Fia. I am so glad you like the line breaks. I feel that, with certain writes, visual presentation can be important to how the piece is perceived. This is one of those.

      • I caught the curse vibe in this.
        It slowly built up like a possession of his mind and actions
        Until it turned into an obsession. I enjoyed devotion in this.

        • Why, thank you so much! I don’t believe we’ve met, so I would like to return the favor. Is there anything of yours in particular you are most proud of? Feel free to message me, or answer here.

      • This is a right good salty tale, especially so since it comes from an Air Force dude. (Makes me a bit jealous, it does) Never see the shore again? I know the feeling, but here’s a tip–if you look to that fluid horizon at night, you will often see tiny lights.

        • I thank you, Sam, and yes, I have seen those lights, wondered briefly what they were, a fleeting thought — but did they notice?

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      Humpy Trumpy

      Humpy TrumpyBy FlatDaddy     Oh, old Humpy Trumpy said there is no listof those  scary people like Epstein who kissedand did awful things to young girls, it is known --done so long ago that they now are all grown.That...

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      • There are no words to describe the utter stupidity and self centredness of those that voted for Mr Trump.They have put at risk their own democracy by electing Trump et al to govern.
        Biden wasn’t perfect, no body is, but at least he had American interests at heart.
        Your poem reminded me that there is still hope ….🙏

        • Thank you. We can only hope that enough of us wake up and take our country back. We need the Supremes to do the right thing, too — a tough job, but it shouldn’t be.

      • Great write

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