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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Read MoreThe boy was raped by his mother's father at 8, 11 & 12 years oldShe was raped by her father & uncle at 6, 9, 11 & 14 years oldA year ago, the boy's father left home for another...
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Tragic. He obviously needed help
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Yup. Sadly it was too late. Thanks Fia.
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Brutal and powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas
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I can barely keep up with all this incest, Keith. This is worse than General Hospital. Where do you dream this stuff up? I’m standing on a ledge after reading it.
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HAHA! General Hospital SUCKS! I don’t know. I’m fucked in the head i guess. Don’t jump. I have more for you to read. xo
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Read MoreOne day my parents were about to go out for a driveSatan appeared and said, "one of you must die" He performed some witchery with his handsSaid something foreign that my parents didn't understand That night my mother saw something as...
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Wait, I’m talking to the anti-Christ? You need to get your number changed. I know a guy…
Moral of the story is close the damn window when you’re taking a bath and don’t accept recipes from creatures.I actually thought fast food was a bad idea until I read this…
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YES! I am the antichrist. Watch the next time you take a bath DK. Don’t eat fast food, eat walnut maple fudge! Thanks my friend. xo
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This was like Rosemary’s Baby with a dark sense of humor, Keith. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreI told her father yesterday that her daughter tastes really goodBetter then what his wife tastes likeI thought he was going to beat me or pull out a gunNopeInstead, he began to cry because I told him his wife...
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This has a Glory Hole Flavor to it. I’ve got visions of Iron Chef going sushi tabernacle.
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Thank you DK. Taste tasting has always been around. Who has a better product or what will the people like. I went with something a bit more crude and relatable. The taste of pussy. If you take care of yourself, the taste is extraordinary. If not, don’t come near me. I can see Guy Fieri doing a segment like this. All these girls laying down, taste testing. Actually Daniel Tosh did a segment like this on his Comedy Central show Tosh.0.
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OMG, I remember Tosh. It’s been a while. He was incredible.
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