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Crimsin
5 months, 2 weeks ago

hello dearest Adagio good afternoon this is great I often wonder where the memory goes and then returns ❤️ a thawing perhaps…
Atticus Abbey
5 months, 2 weeks ago

That’s a good question. Thank you, Brenda.
Kelly Scheppers
5 months, 2 weeks ago

The introduction to a poem, and it’s closing line…when they are one in the same, it makes for quite an impact to the reader, at least to me. It looks quite simple, but in reality, there’s a lot of finesse at play. Your image is striking, as well. Great presentation with its brevity. Much enjoyed, Adagio!
Atticus Abbey
5 months, 2 weeks ago

Thank you, Kelly.

RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
5 months, 2 weeks ago

Beautifully imagined, Fia, an excellent effort!
Deserves a VERY strong title!

ISSUES TO CONSIDER:
1. Unnecessarily Capitalizing every line, which tends to confuse when one complete line, thought, etc; begins or ends, effectively stumbling the flow, attention, and overall magical smoothness of a poem’s captive spell.
2. Poetic voice … how a poe…Read More
- Fia Naturie
  5 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I’ll work on it. Thanks for the guidance
  - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
    5 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    You make sharing a distinct pleasure. 🙏

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