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Read MoreMissed Opportunity Back in the day... She first saw him at the mall buying clothes. He noticed her the first day of school. She liked his hair and smile. He thought, she doesn't hang in cliques...cool! Smart and pretty! They were both...
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Tragic. Well written, nicely done!
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Read MoreHIT BY A TRUCK(This is Joe's true story. 11/4/11.)He left work at rush hour. He had tocash his paycheck and get home. They needed food and diapers. Money was tight. He couldn't afford a car. He walked.Down the street...
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The world is filled with Joe’s and Joelines.
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I knew him and his wife 2 years before his accident and I just recently ran into him and we caught up. Where are the happy endings? I’m not seeing them. Everyone has a rough time, now.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreMidsummer season on my wintry lips, these modern symptoms from antiquated sorrows. The sunlight of acceptance, and midnight of isolation. Youthful blushes and the wrinkles of experience, I have the free will to question my fate. This wealth of imagination, and the poverty of my reality. The...
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Your imagination is a beautiful flowering garden, you are a wealthy man, dear Daniel! Your wording is awesome. You are a master in using the stylistic device of contrasts!
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Daniel this is sublime in its dark vision. You have so much to say in your poem here and I for one am really liking what you wrote. Though dark it has a flow that is mesmerizing.
John
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