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Read MoreCommunity- Comradery - CommentsWriting, putting the work in & finally posting so others can read it, can be a bit unnerving. One of the goals of StarsRite is to become a community that communicates!Poetry is subjective to the interpretation...
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Read MoreIsn't it funny when you're younger, and people tell you that the moon has a way of reminding you of the past? Sitting here on this window sill I can't help thinking about Devin. How, in one night, I...
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Thank you, Hj I really appreciate you saying that.
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Thank you ,Adira. It was fun;))
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Bravo, Fia! Masterful writer you are!
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Thank you, Danial (giggling)
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You are correct. Thank you 😊
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Read MoreResting restlessly within the dark of its sheath,my poetic knife feels expressionless.When so, it wants to be drawnand plundered into the white of the page.Then it wants to cut through the emptinessand carve out beautiful metaphors.The blade will glint...
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Sinister. The metaphors cut like a sharp ass knife. Nice work!
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Haha like your apt feedback! Hahaha
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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Read MoreHeaven can wait…Death a distant thunderstormwith lightning strikes far offannouncing its distant presence.Suicide is not the answer.I do not want to hurtthose that show compassion.So, I’ve decided Heaven can wait.
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This is awesome Daniel…
Such creative format…
Clever use of ellipsis
into period to emphasis
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Will do! Haha
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Thank you, Atticus;))