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Read More...consuming the tongue with liquid pleasure once, a little teapot now a vessel losta skeleton clung curio of rust now bone to chalk ghost to dust
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That us so true, Brenda.
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Read MoreIn the mind's Pentecost just another burnt tonguea furnace of caffeinewith a pillar of saltto season the weevil growing old...In houndstooth
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Read More...a thousand years seeds of wild thingsnow forests of whispering green treeswith imperfect paths to lonely flowermemory flows with stillness of waterbringing peace to the heron
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this is so beautiful dearest Adagio 💕
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Thank you, Brenda.
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The words & the image are so perfectly matched. There is a lot going on behind both, I think
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Thank you for reading my words of thought.
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Read MoreHow can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...
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Dear D,
You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha great end there, friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read More...screaming from the throat fingers and granite eyesembrace a bleached bonedripping blood from veinsturned to stone...
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The thought of turning to stone is excruciating, both physically and metaphysically. This is very effective at setting that scene. There is always that one specific moment the painful memories keep.
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Thank you.
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so dark and descriptive so many things have the power to suck the soul right out of you 💕