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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
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hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
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Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
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hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My deepest condolences to you & your family Brenda. Beautifully written my dear friend. Xox
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Read MoreThere is nothing like the feeling I get on FridayThe minute I think of the word, it’s like a switch goes offFriday is freedomFriday is sweet abandonFriday makes me feel sultry and decadentWhat is it about the day?Every Friday...
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Some Fridays can lead into a sexy Saturday morn…press repeat!
Haha…diggin this vibeBlessings
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. You always know how to kick off a Friday, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Friday is a thing for me.
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Friday’s Rule! Sunday Nights SUCK! Great poem Fia..xo
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You are so right, Keith 😊
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ya love a friday. good write
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Yes, I do. Thank you Ambjr ;))
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Fridays represent freedom, in my opinion. As one who observes the Sabbath, by Friday an hour or two before sunset, all my electronics (phone, laptop) are off. I am unreachable all of Friday night through Saturday evening, and that freedom is intoxicating. All I do for those hours is spend time catching up with family and friends, pray, and enjoy homecooked food that I made with my family. Conversely, Friday nights also mean a chance to care for oneself – whether going out and getting your groove on or staying home in pjs and Netflix. I do like this a lot, as it leaves ample room for personal interpretation. <3 Echo
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Thank you inechoingsilence. These are very good things to do on a Friday. Appreciate it 😊
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Fridays are for fucking. It’s just that simple. Someone frequently comes in from Tuscaloosa – and it’s on. There’s the rest of the weekend to recover… maybe.
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That is a classic line “Friday is for Fucking.” Love it. Dk <3
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS wrote a new post
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Read MoreEach night, for Only You....-————————————-~**~-————————————-Each night, for only You my passion’s rise,'midst such enthralling dreams born from delight.Light softly shimmers from bewitching eyes,whose melting glances thrilled me at first sight.With night's dark shadows dancing all around,there, on your gentle...
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This is a truly seductive write. enjoyed this.
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Thank you, Fia 🌻
How lovely of you to select this one to read and leave such encouraging words in review.Hugs ‘n smiles to You! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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You’re going to seduce all the women on this site if you keep it up, Richard. What the hell are you going to do with all of us? We can’t all fit in your fucking shower.
I love a man who can write a Sonnet.
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Hmmm, Dear Lady-Poet 🤔
A conundrum, M’Dear, if ever there was … but, as vibrantly imaginable as that cozy scenario is, imagination compels a creative bard to queue them all and admit 2-3 at a time; or, spend the coin for a bigger shower. I mean, anything to avoid leaving anyone out … LOL! I do like that title, though … “fucking” shower – ohhh-MY!
To be loved by You for any reason extends far beyond any response my humble words could justly reach.
Bless your darling heart … I’m thinking, “More sonnets!” ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Oh-MY, right back at you, Sweet Adira!🤗
What better for a hopeful Bard than to receive the glowingly sensual approval of such a lusty femme fatale? This, I cannot answer. ; )
Aw, give those guys a chance … they feel the same, I’m sure, with You there to compel their fervorous blood to flow … even if the caresses of their words might not as vibrantly kiss your yearnings’ ache.
Ohhh-YES, Dear Poetess, repeats are always warmly welcome! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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