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Read MoreThe Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation time came to me again last night and reminded me that when it chooses to, it can hurt like hell .. burning brief but hard and deeply with a certain surefire familiarity .. flashing bright on their slow but firm descent much like some back...
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You are of course, absolutely write Fia .. Bless you my friend .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Great reflection. This brings a level of inspiration to stop and cherish the time we have for nothing is promised.
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That my fine literary friend will do nicely thanks a bundle .. Neville 😎👍
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write with an important message my friend. Amazing read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers Damian .. that’ll do nicely very nicely indeed .. Neville 😎👍
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The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.
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hello dearest Brandon good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you like it ❤️
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This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡
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hello beautiful Willow thank you lovely one I appreciate you thoughts these just uncurrents of feeling rising ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Im so sorry to hear you’re going through all of that. You want you write horror go ahead. There are a few people on here that love it.
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It wouldn’t be all horror.
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First reading of your predicament, super sorry to read of this. But hopefully your surgeries are successful and we get a new Paula with a totally new poetic vision.
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Love Sonnet LXXIX
As I glide smoothly across
the ice, as the cold air assails
my face, I feel like I am
flying. Your faceappears under the ice, staring
up at me. You are smiling,
your hands, upturned, reach
toward me, inviting me tojoin you in the cold, wet
waters of this dream. I
fly faster, skates movinglike a blur,…Read More
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I love the chill of this poem – if you’re not a fan of Kate Bush do listen to Under Ice on The Hounds of Love album!
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Thanks HJx, for the sweet comment and for the the Kate Bush mention. I will definitely go listen. I actually do like the few songs I have heard from her. As well as her duet with Peter Gabriel on “Don’t Give Up”.
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You’re welcome – enjoy Kate! “Waking the Witch” from the same album inspired me to write Heathen, the opening tale in Basque Love Stories. It’s here on Starsrite, too, live, featuring sensational young actress Isla Furl as Julia. Enjoy!
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Such a vivid, haunting piece. I love how it moves from ice to fire with such ease. Beautifully done.
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Thanks Curly Grace. Your comment is appreciated, as are you and your poetry.
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Some will not see the light until it is time. Good piece;)