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Read MoreWhen you stop dreaming, do you die?When you stop crying, because the well is dryWill you understand that I am more than just what you seeIs it hard to comprehend that I will always be me I was born in...
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Thank you sometimes listening to music gets me going. lol
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with some clever wordplay my friend. Dig the vibe! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. glad you liked it;))
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hello beautiful Fia your strength makes you beautiful…this is awesome and emotive poetry… ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin, you are sweet for saying that.
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Nice rhyming with a little fire Lady, Tight
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Thank you, Me:))
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The thing about wounds is that if we don’t get them clean before they seal, infection will begin the rot. And that is toxic. Fierce statement here, Fia
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Thank you, Willow;))
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You have a strong voice Fia. A voice that says what needs to be said, that keeps it real. And you put that voice into your art. Loved reading your poem Fia.
-Curt
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Thank you so much, Redzone;))
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Damn woman! Who got your knickers in a bunch? LOL
Kidding. I love a good kick ass write. I like confidence! You really got your points across for sure. Very creatively at that.
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Thank you, Styx. I was listening to some music and it got me going. haha
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Fia with a S on her chest. Made me sit right up in my chair.
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Ohhh, love it. Thank you Kay-1
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Thank you so much, nontoxicdart
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Super charged into a poetic poem of powerful emotions for this person who judges and whom in the end your let go with your hopes for their better future. You put great heart into this poem and I could feel your words like a piece of music that kept me rapt throughout.
John
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Thank you John:)
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I do hope you’re healing now! There’s nothing adequate to describe that level of pain but you sure did it justice.
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Thank you for your comment and concern, Willow. I am healing, but it’s taking so damn long. It’s been over 3 months now and there is still a lot of pain in the leg and knee. I can hear them talking and laughing. Ice (the solid water type) has become a welcome friend.
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Yikes! This past year I had a severe sprained ankle. It felt like it was on fire! It swelled up like an elephant foot.
Went to the ER and did X-rays. Nothing broken thank god!
I can’t imagine how much pain that was when it is actually broken bones.
I’m sure you noticed by now I’m a huge baby when it comes to pain.I can totally relate to the pain speaking in tongues!
Very well put Curt.
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Read MoreLove Sonnet LXXI I see your face in my dreams, your red hair, blown by your breath, smells of your jasmine shampoo, and lies across my breast. Yaraa, why do you haunt me? Why does my mind always return to you, to your soft skin, and savory...
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This is sorrowful with a hint of passion behind the words. Like it
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Hi Fia, hope you are well. Thank you for the visit and the comment. It is appreciated very muchly.
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Read MoreLove Sonnet LXX Yaraa, I see you, all of you as your faded jeans, peasant blouse, walk along this dusty path. It was during a full October Moon, with multi-colored leaves blown everywhere, that your Autumn shadow kissed my lips with your glow. Then came December...
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write with lots of layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oohhh. Let it rip Fia!!
Love the kick ass vibe chica!