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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)
And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
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This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.
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This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one
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Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.
John
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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I like how you put in there I am not sure you meant to tell me because sometimes things slip and they were never meant to be said out loud. Lovely
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I wonder about past experiences with certain people and wonder as well but like you said it’s not very often. I like this
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Incredible! It’s like she doesn’t want to desecrate her sacred holiness even though it begs her to give in to human desires and lust so she transforms back into smoke. Really incredible poem and picture, Crimsin.
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Nice! Enticing and not tacky at all. This is pure poetry, Crims. You did a great job with it. And what a pleasure to read it.
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Passionately penned, Brenda. An amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian