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    it pains, on the morrow bleed

    contemptious need flooding over my sorrownever on the morrow to be let freeit's just another day of sadnesswith knowledge, heavy privy to his holiest's feelingsbedlam vain, I am not enough, I'm afraidlike Cain before me my gratitude is given...

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    • Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
      Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
      You are loved.

      • hello lovely Alexandria good evening thank you most graciously for such a beautiful comment and thought 💕 I guess this was a conversation I was having with God today sometimes I feel like when he asks something of me I am ungrateful…my heart hurts over this that my first insinct is to be selfish…I truly appreciate you tonight 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously forgive my late response I thought I got back to you on this one ❤️

    • Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.

      John

      • hello dearest John that is such a beautiful comment and thought just lovely thank you ❤️

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    mirage

    strictly cautious of my soulit shines sometimes gathering stars to itthey covet the lovely shimmerdesiring to know me better my cover for a moment set aside my thoughts tumble forth from my lipsmetaphors for the sanctity of beingfor a...

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    Empath Me

    Being depressed was horrible beyond beliefscary.Yet in the deepest of despair I became somewhat of an empathable to feel the suffering of othersdeep down in my soul.I'm not a praying personbut I prayed for them allI cried for them...

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    • No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville

    • When you’ve been there, you know

    • Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️

      • Alexandria et al
        Thanks for reading and the comments.Its nice when others understand not just the words but the author.
        Love you all

    • I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.

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    invisible

    slowing down the mood, I take time to contemplate your absenceit haunts the feeling of love lostwe would never fit rightmy heart knows I don't fit with anyonemy thoughts linger, with a deep sighsecret sorrow I carry with methe...

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    • Very much enjoyed write from the off to the opposite end of the page .. I hope to check in more often as I learn how to navigate these stars .. Warmly, Neville 😎👍

      • hello dearest Neville good morning and welcome thank you graciousy for the love on this and look forward to get to know you through your poetry 💕

    • Dark and Misty emotions.
      A journey through sorrow.
      Regards
      James

      • hello dearest James thank you graciously for the love on this sorrow keeps me honest 💕

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    Time's Up with the talented Adagio

    In a seance of blue, failing light, speaking to the deadbut not in metaphors of flowers or sleepy-time hoursaround the mahogany torrid glory, sinister eventin the shadows, quicken for a deadly eventbuilding in tempo, to my regret as the air thickens...

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