this is so beautiful dearest Adagio 💕

Thank you, Brenda.

The words & the image are so perfectly matched. There is a lot going on behind both, I think

Dear D,

You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷

Haha great end there, friend.

Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔

I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))

hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕

Tremendous

Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍

Who decides when it isn’t? Is there a voting process? Or do we just say screw it & flip the status quo? I like the powerful simplicity of this one

Thanks for reading.

It’s more about accepting the present moment.
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I tend to say that when I see that there is no other way. Nicely done.

I thought I was you were going in to a Bruce Hornsby song ” That’s just the way it is. Some things will never change. That’s just the way it is. But don’t you believe them”.
Nice!

Thanks Fia and Alexandria for reading and taking time to comment.

The thought of turning to stone is excruciating, both physically and metaphysically. This is very effective at setting that scene. There is always that one specific moment the painful memories keep.

Thank you.