Toasting deaths chowder… over the sounds of ghosts nice line. Like it

Thank you, Fia.

Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜

Oh! This is very good, Brenda.

I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞

hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕

Powerful. You paint this scene well.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.

John

this made me smile dearest Benny great write 💕

I enjoyed the playful, lightly sinister nature of this. Admittedly, no.. I didn’t see that couplet coming lol.

Crimsin, everything you write is so deep. This is painfully beautiful.
Remember, “For His anger endureth but a moment, but Joy cometh in the morning”
You are loved.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brenda, you have a gift of taking even your suffering and making great art. This speaks to me of a soul hurting but also a talent that is unmistakably the source of true art. You are more than worthy to God I am sure. And not a selfish person.

John