Enjoyed this read…

The second stanza is what got me.;))

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you.

I get annoyance and anger in this piece. With underlying hurt. Nice

Thank you Fia, this is something I’ve had penned for a while. It came from observation of a friend, some of this is her words at different times, I just put it on paper and this is the end result..

Brilliantly penned, Fred. This write has teeth and goes for the jugular my friend. I also agree with, Fia. There are tones of hurt simmering underneath though. Great write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sorry to hear, glad all is good. Thank you for the read my friend……

This is sweet, Richard;))

Well, Dear Adira,
This, of course, is fiction, but in my imagination she did swoon, and then we made hot frothy love over and over amongst the caressing bubbles.
Ahhh-YES! That stanza is one of my faves, too … birds-of-a-feather! ; )

I’m so grateful for your deeelightful reviews, Adira, and for my new title, too.
Hugs ‘n other lovely stuff! ⁓ Rascal🖌