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Read MoreTo grow old is to let goNo matter how steep the roots are embedded into the groundyou must never stop trying to reach for the light and emotions in whichawaits for you with maternal patience.The earth is always at...
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Thank you so much! I’m happy to be welcomed here with such open arms– I was extremely anxious to navigate a new platform such as Stars Rite at first, but after seeing so many people express shared passions through writing, I feel alright. This poem was intended for those who tend to cling onto themselves rather than take that leap of faith. (˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)
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Beautifully penned, Sunny. Excellent first write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks a bunch! It means a lot to me. ^^’
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I’ve missed reading your introspective heart. Beautiful as always.
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hello beautiful Betty I’ve missed you very much out of all the people I know I’m happy this poem spoke to you I hope you are doing well me I’m wandering ❤️thank you for being here…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for the love on this write ❤️
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The cinderella comparison had me saying aww even though I was smiling while reading this piece
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A lovely write. Well written with some great rhymes!
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Read MoreThe Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Maurice is going to have my blood pressure up. lol
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Fantastic. Love it, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus;))
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Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!-
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lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian
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Chère F.,
I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
blunt Dutch analysis.
But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
I love some of Rothko’s work too.Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.So:
Please be patient with me!
I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
Warm Waving from a distance, Gus-
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Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.
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Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.
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Lmao no way. thank you Vision
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This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
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That is so true Thomas. Thank you
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Clean slate works also. Lol
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Maurice met an untimely death. lol Thank you CasketSharpe;))
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I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
Awesome work.
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This is a sweet and such a thoughtful write for your first entry on Stars Rite. Welcome to Stars Rite.