Ahavati (Tam)

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Jacob erin-cilberto
7 months, 1 week ago

Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.

Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.
- Crimsin
  7 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
Damian DeadLove
7 months, 1 week ago

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Crimsin
  7 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
Benjamin Scraps
7 months, 1 week ago

There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
- Crimsin
  7 months ago
  
  thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
RPM
7 months, 1 week ago

Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
- Crimsin
  7 months ago
  
  thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️

Fia Naturie
7 months, 1 week ago

I feel that you pulled a lot of Greek mythology inspiration here? I could be wrong. I like the piece
- Benjamin Scraps
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Greco-Roman culture & philosophies, plus some New Testament references. Legionnaires, Roman soldiers with a particular skill at building roads, were not paid in gold but salt, which is where we derive the word ‘salary’. That might be somewhat of an urban legend, but it seems to be at least rooted in truth.
  
  Great eye again, thank you!!
  - Fia Naturie
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you;))
Jacob erin-cilberto
7 months, 1 week ago

I think many of us feel like machines. We work 9-5 jobs…like factory work, restaurant work…I did both.
Watched the clock…tried to have fun, but machines don’t laugh or cry.
This poem has a sense of rhythm that matches that routine…and the rhyme scheme is subtle but smart.

Really enjoyed and felt this read….related from my days before I got lucky and found teaching.
j.

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