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    sucks

    with intensity I approach needy and bluethere is a void around me full of sexual energysucking you into my darkhalted feelimg, my impression it's depressionmy soul rises with the passion, then the tide pulls me backundulating passion plays with...

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    silent witness with the talented Adagio

    The wind, a phantom legion, howled its ancient song, Through skeletal branches, where dead leaves clung. A tempest brewed, a symphony of dread, whispering secrets of the long since dead, The house, a wounded beast, with shutters torn and weak,...

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    • This was so perfectly executed that I can’t tell which is whose voice. Powerfully descriptive imagery,both of you 🙌

      • hello beautiful Willow good afternoon thank you graciously for the love on this we both appreciate it deeply ❤️

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    The Grim Reaper

    The Grim ReaperThe old woman was taking a walk through the forest, like she did every day before breakfast.  She enjoyed the  fresh morning air and the silence. There was hardly anyone outside at this early hour. To her...

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    • Hello Elke. Outstanding story. A stellar piece of writing that captures so much detail and intrigue. A perfect piece for this time of year. Well done my friend. xo

      • Thank you so much for reading and your kind comment, dear Keith! Your comments always tear my heart wide open with gratitude and awe!

    • Quite the riveting tale, Sappho! It was very clever of you to switch up the common portrayals of death and love. I enjoyed all the natural references and surprises you sprinkled throughout this piece. Excellent write, my friend.

      Clay

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    thirst

    somber need bleeding in my soulconjuring the evil in meyou seek redemption in my bloodnever to cry I won't even feel my deathyou'll never touch the honesty of meand for that I'm gratefulinflicted dread I release, may it find...

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    • So beautiful, so dark, so you Brenda. Excellent piece my friend.

      • good mornig dearest Keith I’m happy you liked it I was worried I went too far but I never worried about that before why start now right? thank you my friend ❤️

    • Redemption with a hollow scream. Love it, Brenda.

      • hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you ❤️

    • hello lovely one good evening thank you just a feeling that overcame me last night I wasn’t sure if I should write this I’m happy it worked for you ❤️

    • Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    dreamer

    squanders the day wandering through my thoughtsjumping from one cloud to another with none to sustain methen falling into the darker crevices where I begin dreamingthat's when I feel them, the demonsmy soul shrinks back and I gather my...

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    • As we read this we think of our darkness and how it hungers always for more. We constantly watched for the slightest weakness, even inattention is a weakness. But to have it’s icy call within our darkness and acceptance, deeelish

      • hello dearest Me I think of the parst of space that are empty I find peace there it is a heavy dark… there I can be myself I go wandering…someday when I pass from this dominion I hope to explore other plains of existence thank you so much for you very apt comment ❤️

    • Hoi hoi Chère C.,
      Love the write.
      And love the artwork too.
      Kind regards, Gus

      • hello dearest Gus good evening thank you most graciously I love the picture as well I thought it went well with the poem ❤️

    • This reads more like a short story then a poem. I love it. The darkness and moodiness crawls into my skin. As I read, I love the atmosphere you created with your words and with the image. Marvelous Brenda. xo

      • good morning dearest Keith I think you’re right I should have listed it as a series it well be part of a bigger story thank you gracioulsy for taking in the mood ❤️

    • Father, I confess to ink the silence, haunting the moonless nights. Well done, Brenda.

      • thank you graciously dearest Adagio for a very beautifully poetic comment ❤️

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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