I like this stanza “I’m cautious in my approach, with proper reverence given to the forces greater than I” I enjoyed this Crimsin

Powerfully penned, Brenda. A beautiful write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously my friend ❤️

That is spooky Daniel.;)_

I have seen my grandmother in my dreams. To see in real it’s scary. I liked the line to reign better than serve.

My grandmother she is in her 87 yrs and constantly when I cry she says don’t cry for past your life is ahead go live.

Now I still cry but my tears heavy they roll in my eyes falling drop by drop

Jessy Jacob ❤️

thank you graciously dearrest Damian ❤️

Imagination, makes for good books and paper scratching. Many of the great writers used pens with teeth that bit into the soul.

Your a talented writer Brenda! Such detail and precision. Great work here!! xoxxo