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Read MoreThe originating fire of creationReaches into the depths of imaginationWhen an innovative idea is trappedLike faraway music lost in a fogIn the distance I hear the prologueMagical ingenuity awaits to be tapped It lingers dormant with intentionAnticipating the flash of...
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Thanks Fia.
It’s an older piece and one of my favorites. I’ll be including it when I publish one of poetry books.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian I try my best.
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Read Moreacning love, blood spilled, emotions poolmy vulnerability exploited, makes me feel unlovedpeople are cruel I don't carebut when the one I love joins in I dietrust broken and crytoo different, I'm unloveable I guessstill hope plagues metelling me I...
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You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!
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An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight
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Read MoreAdvice is usually passed down by the older generations Wisdom comes from those who have been around longer But knowledge also comes from us with different vocations Improving and making our critical thinking skills even stronger Now that I’m older I value my...
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. It’s amazing the little things we remember and the nugget of wisdom hidden within. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Sometimes I wish I would have heeded more of her advice, but sometimes we have to learn on our own as well.
Thank you for stopping by, reading and commenting. Always I appreciate your feedback.
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Read Morecrazy is a perspective and I've held it for most of my lifeabandoned at three my sharp little mind saw and remembers the precursorspeople always have a tell when their about to break your heartthe night the cops came...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. It’s amazing how the body reacts when our minds are being overwhelmed. Living with lasting scars isn’t always easy my friend. Very heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for your understanding comment ❤️
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I can feel this one my friend. Strong write with all the colors and detail you’re so amazing at. Great piece Brenda.xo
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The rhythm of this piece is nice.
I like the first two lines, it’s like you can put it on a loop.