TreeMap and Ahavati (Tam) are now friends
Daniel Long and Ahavati (Tam) are now friends
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Anchors slip away in a sea, calmed by nightly solitude. A puff of wind, eases a bedroom shade open. A flake of dust, drifts alone, gently on.
Beautifully penned, Daniel. Sensational write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
TreeMap and dimpy are now friends
What remains of my sun? Clouds, facades of the high skies, obscuring mirrored daystars of my eyes! There toy are in my sky, whirling in tears in the wind. I want to reach up and grab hold of you. I see the two searing-white pearls of...
Really like the closing line…
Title is an attention grabber. Third stanza is so sad.
Powerfully penned, Daniel. That ending drives the point home my friend. Exceptional write. Appreciate you.
Beautifully penned, Daniel. Sensational write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian