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Read MoreFrigid, calm front hides in northern winds, the vast sky of my bedroom dims. Stream in winter Iced over, mother’s embrace letting go at bedtime. Still raining, sky’s dark pillow, eyelids become anchors, smothering. The cold front blanketing these damp lids, peacefully covers the coming storm.
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Read MoreI kiss my Delilah,molten love pours from my soul,igniting her with sweet madness. I melt her with flattery,as fire does to snow. In wakeful dreams I am not alone.
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Read MoreMy eyes upon her beautiful, breathless silence. Whilst she sleeps forever, I whisper to her in prayer. Hoping she’ll come back, I know that’ll never be. I consider setting foot into the grave to find her.
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So much sadness in this. I wish I could say I’ve never felt that but it wouldn’t be true. Take care, Daniel.
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Thank you, Alexandria.
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. A heartfelt tender write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian