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    A White Petal

    I have fallen in love with her,and I cannot stop my feelings. A rose blooms in our bed,blooming from a rainy summer. A white petal had fallen onto the bedcover,I picked it up, smelled it,and rubbed it on her lips.She still...

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    • Loved this so much Daniel. Enchanting and artfully crafted. I was mesmerized as the scene unfolded through your words.

      John

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Venus

    You rise in the twilight for I too bask in the dark. While I desire the burning day star, I thrive in the night.   You are ornamented with hues of Hell, Heaven, lust, and purity. I embellish the hues of an angel’s velvety...

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    • This read for me as an emotional sensual journey with such poignancy at the end. Truly deeply felt poetry at its finest.

      John

    • Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I felt the burning of this piece. Well done!

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    Eye Candles

    Candles within your eyes, illuming my shadow.  Lonely in the dim I was, there is now a glow to follow. 

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    • This short and I can’t help to say aww. This is sweet

    • You know what I like about you, Daniel? You write and pour your heart out and couldn’t care less what others think or if you even get a nod or comment. You’re incredibly talented. Never stop being you.

      • It’s how I’ve been living… pretty much in the shadow for a long time now. I refuse to analyze too many of other poet’s work and I don’t like there being too much rigid structure on writing. I write how I feel and in a fluid, bending structure that allows me to complete whatever piece I want the way I want it delivered to the world.

        Thank you as always Alexandria,
        Daniel

    • Esoteric and beautiful. The image you painted here was filled with passion and beauty. Enjoyed this much.

      John

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    Memories Stir

    A blanket of dust obscures our picture. Soft earth once your skin, now dusted with snow.   This sheet had layered over months without warmth. However, we are soon to hold each other again.   Then spring will dawn upon the rains of April and shower...

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    The Seasons of My Mood

    Regardless of summer joyousness, I will sense the overcast of wintry darkness.   Sometimes I will feel happiness, yet there is that which lingers smotheringly.   Always at the brim of my eyes is a teary shower   which glazes over my eyes and thunderous shouts...

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    • I’ve never thought of it as like seasons before, but now that I have it is a strangely accurate description, especially when it feels more unpredictable. Maybe I should invest in an emotional tornado shelter.

      • A shelter from emotional tornadoes would be medication coupled with therapy… take it from me! lol

    • Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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