First word and first reaction. Jesus.
I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.

Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!

Wow. You nailed this one.

Ohhh, goodness-ME!

How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!

Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌

I really liked this Sam. It reminds me on a personal level about myself. Can connect to it. Well done!

Daniel

Very introspective vibe. I thoroughly dug it
The pic is dope as well

Naaj

This life you are trying to figure out is a puzzle. Who are you living for? Good questions.

hello dearest Sam beautifully introspective I’m a firm believer in self review 💕

Brilliantly penned, Sam. Great introspective write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Excellent. Love the wording and construction of this write.

I like everything but the end

“Just so you know”

It felt unfinished, it felt as if it didn’t fit with the rest.

The rest felt powerful and driven.

Regards James

Outstanding storytelling, DK. This is just incredible detail, like you definitely pull from life experience, about fishing you can tell you know what you’re talking about. Like I said before you have much depth in your seductive tales. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m so glad that you’re glad!
Actually, this is my first attempt at a series or book on this site. I thought that I had started it, but I was mistaken. Then, I found out I could not incorporate my previous post into a series. So, I reposted the chapter and added. Do you think I should take the first one down? I hated to lose the comments, but it’s repetitive.

Yeah. Fuck it. That’s my mantra.

As I previously said. Your story telling is superb. Intriguing, hot, pleasurable and orgasmic. XXX

Glorious, DK, simply spellbinding!

I find it amazingly brilliant how you so easily keep me so arousingly enthralled in your living, breathing, mental, emotional, psychological, almost hypnotic, erotically engaging spell.

Lucky us this is an ongoing series!
Thank you ever-so warmly, Our Incomparable Master Authoress! ⁓ Richard🖌

This anthology is super arousing. I love the attention to detail.

Passionately penned, DK. This is some incredible storytelling my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you! I love you too!

Infectious! The cure is to read and to fantasize. Wicked stuff!

Well, Dear DK,
I read this in your Prologue, and I’m sure you’d rather I did not put you through that same drawwwn-out dialogue … LOL!

Onward ‘n UPward to your next sizzlingly captivating chapter! ⁓ Richard🖌

Brilliantly penned, DK. There is always so much depth underneath these saucy tales you weave my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your vote: Buckle in girl. I’m getting ready to spill my guts. And it’s nothing to be proud of.

OMG, HJ. Yeah, exactly like that. Come over here and lick it off. I feel like feeding you.

This is one scorching story. Outstanding. Your a talent DK.

Well, M’Dear 🌺

Let me start with this: “GULP!”
Nowhere is there a “fiction” tag … thus, as wonderful as it is to imagine it’s all or partly fact (and, I’ve read every chapter through “Back In The Kitchen”), your unrivaled gift as a master raconteur has drawn me into every stunningly vivid detail of each breathfilled, thrumming moment, as though I’m alive in each character’s skin.
It’s truly staggering how erotically graphic and honest to reality the entire timbre is, all without a smidgen of disgusting ugliness … it’s entirely not in WHAT you write, but in HOW you write it, how you put, how you make it come across as though it’s all as humanly natural as one slipping into their shoes … as though it’s exactly what I’d do and how I’d act under the same circumstances.

And, in addition, not a grammar, syntax, or diction gaffe in the lot … sighhh! Writers like You could put editors out of business, make editing arcane.

Oh, well … here I go again hogging all the air, wearing thin my welcome. Let me close with a very-very sincere, “Thank you, Lady-DK, for the sheer enjoyment of sharing your phenomenally rare prowess with a sparkling pen, Our Exemplarily Skilled Writer!” ⁓ Richard🖌

PS: in a lull, drop by my place to see what I’ve been up to of late … hint-hint! ; )

Love those opening lines. The write felt like an emotional rollercoaster like most situations like those are. Great ink.

Clearly, I’m late to the show, but whew loved every second of this read.