ops sorry I already crossed the lake… you have to swim… as I said your poetry is always amazing

this is abosutely gorgeous lovely Fia this moved me greatly ❤️

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with some deep layers my friend. This gives me musing vibes.. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Oh wow…this one took me to a memory place. Amazing, Fia

I enjoyed this,Fia.

Most excellent, Fia.

Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write with a spicy vibe my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
Is it my imagination or are you writing better and better every time?

My favorite piece:
I will not say

What you need to hear

I will only come closer

Look into my eyes

See what takes hold

A proof of your calm self worth I think.

Simply wonderful!
Warm regards, Gus

“Fall into me

Or lose

Your moment”
Thats a no brainer, Fia. A wonderful write. “)

Sultry, subtle, and provocative within the same moment. There is a gently palpable and urgent touch present in each line that is welcome and enveloping. Absolutely fantastic write, Fia!

Clay