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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
Good to see you donating to the site. It’s about time!-
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group Music is Art
I wanted to post two versions of the same song to show, even if the music changes it is still a powerful write
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian