13 – Stars Rite

Backdeckbenny (Peter)
2 months ago

Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
👍
- Betty
  2 months ago
  
  Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
Damian DeadLove
2 months ago

Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Betty
  2 months ago
  
  Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
Harriet-Jacqui xx
2 months ago

Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
- Betty
  2 months ago
  
  Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
Harriet-Jacqui xx
2 months ago

Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
Fia Naturie
2 months ago

Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
- Betty
  2 months ago
  
  I mean, we had to work. 🙂
  
  When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
  
  Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
  - Fia Naturie
    2 months ago
    
    You are welcome to do that here. Betty
Styxian
2 months ago

What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.
- Betty
  1 month, 4 weeks ago
  
  Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
  
  Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
  
  I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
  
  Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
Styxian
1 month, 4 weeks ago

She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.

“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
I_IS_ ME
1 month, 3 weeks ago

Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
- Betty
  1 month, 3 weeks ago
  
  Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.

Damian DeadLove
2 months ago

Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling per usual my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fia Naturie
  2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Damian
Duhsjaak
2 months ago

Chère F.,
Lovely to see you have posted again.

And, while my tongue seems to have a will of its own, who needs Valentine if we can have this?

Also poem-wise, I’m hungry for more!
Warm regards, Gus
- Fia Naturie
  2 months ago
  
  Oh Gus it is coming. Thank you
Sappho (Elke)
2 months ago

This is a very well told story, dear Fía. It awakens the curiosity of your readers and keep it up. I can hardly wait to read the sequel!
- Fia Naturie
  2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Elke appreciate that.
I_IS_ ME
2 months ago

Hahaha, tis is so real and we’re thinking you incorporated some truth in this, tight one Lady
- Fia Naturie
  2 months ago
  
  Haha no just my imagination. Thank you ME
Harriet-Jacqui xx
2 months ago

Kind of story I come back from sun basking in Gran Canaria for! Superb writing, Fia, and much enjoyed.
- Fia Naturie
  2 months ago
  
  Thank you for that H.J;))
Rosie C
3 weeks, 2 days ago

Heart-warming and affectionate piece.

Emotionally unraveling throughout.

I’m glad it had a sweet, happy ending.

I had a feeling that disaster might strike, but instead all safe and well. x
- Fia Naturie
  3 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Thank you Rosie, Maybe I will write something that has disaster in it. 😉

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