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Read MoreI'm not holding backI'm just hiding it wellIt's carried in the painOf the stories I tellBlink and you missIn between the linesYou may feel the sorrowIn the sign of the timesYou won't hear the painIf I muffle the soundYou...
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Thank you Fia!
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWalking in with a smile Feeling light as if at this very moment was the best Walking in with a frown Feeling pulled down and weary as if gravity has a vendetta A tune comes to mind “Don’t worry be happy” A tune comes to...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing insight and wisdom my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I really appreciate you.;))
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Read MoreAn Autumn Moon Night “Gonna get into it baby down where it’s tangled and dark... When we get through it baby you’re gonna give up your heart. Gonna get a little risky baby Oh, that’s my favorite part.” ~~Bonnie Raitt oooo When I first saw you the moon was...
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Is this a song? It’s cool. I like it
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First, Thank You, Fia. I’m glad you liked this poem. Second, I am not sure it’s a ‘song’. I think to make it a song there would have to be a lot of editing, along with some experimentation. I am not sure I would know how to do this. The poem was written as I was listening to this Bonnie Raitt song, so besides quoting some of the lines found in that song, I think some of the rhythm of the song did find its way into the poem. But to be truthful, this was more an accident than intended.
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Read MoreEvery night... I cry when I sleep with no one to chase away the bad dreams, mend any of the hurts, the silent screams or the broken heart that continually bleeds. Time and again, when dreaded night comes, I cry in my sleep, grind my teeth...
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I feel this poem. Your emotions spilling over into the waking world due to a nightmare. Good piece
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Thank you 😊 because of the situation I’m in this is almost the norm for me.
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It’s good to have a good cry, even when it happens again and again, it cleanses the soul. I felt this poem. Bravo!
D.
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Thanks 😊
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Read MoreRewriting Memory I’ve said it many times, over, and over again Guilt is a needless load to carry forever The solution comes in asking for forgiveness Or you else can’t go on happily with new endeavors And though it’s all in the past you...
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That’s all we can do is get up and keep going.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very good. The rain is a good cloak to hide the tears.