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    The Church Banquet

    On the grass outside the church, several tables were put end to end, then covered with white sheets so it looked like there was one long table. Platters and dish's of home cooked food were placed on it, brought...

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    A leaf,slowly quietly fell.Was it orange or red?I couldn't tell. Perhaps it was a leaf in a fairytale.As it watched the protagonist grow.And other leaves begin to fall. Personalities begin to grow.As the leaves slowly fell.There is a story everyone tell. Of...

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    • The life of a leaf. Wonderful personification in this, and nice analogy for how life is for a human…except the only tree we fall off of is our family tree…..At times, I got pushed off of mine….but somehow this leaf got off the ground and found another spot in the tree.
      j.

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    Ripe

    No answers - yet.  Am waiting for Rodge the postie to arrive.  Good - clock's ticking into the day - hooray!  Just grabbed the glass milk bottle from the doorstep. Can see the milkie's oops a daisy slip!  (can...

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  • the sole tenant of a blues song

    the sole tenant of a blues song   black and white sheet music color coordinated notes on faces in shadows all of the streetlights the same color as the empty hearts walking the cobblestones at midnight after the bars have shut down much like they have when feelings find no songs to coordinate with the...

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    • Like a film noir movie this has the effects of heartbreak and loneliness with a touch of moral ambiguity. I can feel the barren parts of life all over it. Good one, J.

    • I wholeheartedly agree with Tim. This does have a film noir ambiance to it. Were you by any chance wearing a trench coat and a low brimmed fedora while writing it? Lol, so good to have your presence here, J. Like you never missed a beat!

      • Thank you, Kelly….I had the trench coat on but couldn’t find my fedora.
        Thanks, it is good to be on this site….I have decided this is my choice now.

        So many of us from WC migrated here.

    • Reminds me of all those movies about city angst. (I am suppressing a rant about how much I hate New York), and all it’s denizens… I can see them now walking down seedy sidewalks in the rain, their furthest horizon in easy walking distance. Beautiful imagery sir, and a nice reminder of how happy I am in a town with only about twelve occupied houses.

      • Interesting what you said. I was from the Bronx, originally and by the time we left…I was so ready for a new place to live.
        Guess I was NOT a city boy even though I was born there.
        I appreciate this review. We lived in a five-story high rise on the fifth floor. NO elevator so it was a trek every time.

        Thanks again, just hope you don’t hate me…ha ha.

        j.

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