-
![Profile picture of twofiftythree]()
twofiftythree wrote a new post
![]()
Read Morei dig with both handsmud swallowinmy wrists and forearmspullin downwardthe weight of the earthdraggin against my shoulders roots knot round my fingersknuckles cracked open by rocksdirt packed under my nailsrainwater runnin browndown my throatslippin deeperand the holekeeps begginto become my...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write that makes me feel claustrophobic my friend. I too have written about quicksand or trying to escape the grave. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Al Ashcott]()
Al Ashcott and
Martin are now friends
![Profile Photo]()
-
![Profile picture of Aldo Kraas]()
Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Let me just be myself
Go to sleep when I want to
Let me wake up
When I want to wake up
I love to sleep in
In the mornings
And wake up at noon
I will always work for my God
Writing my poems for my God
I will never take a day of from
Work
I enjoy working for my God
Every single day
I use my feelings that
Comes out straight from my…Read More![Profile Photo]()
liked this
-
-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This grips you. It gives the feeling that they are pushing away what they want. I like this ME
-
![Profile picture of I_IS_ ME]()
Thanks a ton Lady, your reading and commenting always charges us
-
-
-
![Profile picture of Aldo Kraas]()
Aldo Kraas wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreI made my resolution I will go to bed early every night So that I can get a proper sleep I will not stay up past my bed time Because I will jeopardize my sleep schedule that I made for me I made my resolution I...
1 Comment-
![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is very calm or I am just reading it that way. Nicley done
-
- Load More Posts
I take it that you are sinking down into the mud. The more you pull yourself up the wetter the dirt gets making it feel impossible to get out of it. Interesting piece