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Read MoreIn the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore rainlike tight-fitted jeanswhich clung to them soggyin moments of gleewith a spin and a spreethey giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds,as each soaking thudof their shiny red bootsforced a...
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I did it in high school one day with a friend. We kicked a can in the front of the school in pouring rain and kids were watching from the windows. He’s since passed away so I’ll always remember that day being glad we did it. 🙂
And yeah, us kids also ran in yards in the rain leaving our parents aghast. lol
Thank you for the comment, Adelly. 🙂
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childhood was full of such days for me I’ve always been an outdoor person this is beautiful Tim ❤️
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Thanks so much Crimsin. I appreciate your comment. 🙂
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Powerful. So true.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Excellent write with a nostalgic flavor my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian.
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Time you word painted a vision of innocence here. I am enchanted by the scene you wrote so well. You captured the joy of childhood wonderfully and i enjoyed this much.
John
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Read MoreI'm probably prettyCommon these days,But I don't get out.So IWouldn'tKnow.I'm always gapping outInto oncoming trafficGetting lost in the horizon,A slow blur and sudden stopsIStill stare out of theWindow on long windingDays downtown,The bus is lessFriendlyThese daysAnd I never smileAnymore. Doing...
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Your poems are super sad. I assume you’re a manic depressive? I hope life changes soon and puts you in a better place.
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I am schizoaffective bipolar type, add, and substance abuse disorder diagnosed. But I have persistent depression. But uh, usually I deal with depression in poetry and they’re supposed to be sad and stuff.
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Hey, that’s what writing is for…expression. If it helps even a little, keep writing.
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hello dearest poet this is a crazy world right now so I get this but writing and connecting with people here is not doing nothing it is expressing yourself at a safe distance great write ❤️
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Read MoreFailure is a way of life,And this depressionIs a chasm in my personalTopography. Lowly isn't underneath enoughTo express the empty frustrationAt never living up to theExpectations of other people.And,I hear suicide serenadingMe with its silentSolipsism,The call of a long restfulSleep.Free...
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The dark call to death’s serenade is not what one should gravitate to, but the pull is strong. Nice piece had me thinking.
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Death doesn’t bring peace.
You have to be alive to feel peace.Know what I’m saying!
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hello dearest Nolan I am schizo too and I understand these feelings but death is just a doorway with no promises great write ❤️
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Oh! This reminds me of when me and my brother would play in the rain when we were kids.
In the front yard we didn’t have stickers so we would be barefoot. Lol
Good times!