A well written, sensual piece. Well done, Balsam!

Those last two lines are fireworks. I like the fact that you kept it tastefully erotic without it becoming graphic. That is the level of creative adult writing that is noticed for its literary prowess. Well done.

Thank you very much!

Thank you!

Passionately penned, Balsam. An excellent erotic write with feverish wordplay my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow.. you certainly have a way with words..!! Captivating and erotic..!! 👍