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Those last two lines are fireworks. I like the fact that you kept it tastefully erotic without it becoming graphic. That is the level of creative adult writing that is noticed for its literary prowess. Well done.
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Thank you very much!
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Passionately penned, Balsam. An excellent erotic write with feverish wordplay my friend. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow.. you certainly have a way with words..!! Captivating and erotic..!! 👍
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A well written, sensual piece. Well done, Balsam!