Nice sensual write… vivid… flowing… swept me up… carried me along…

Thank you so much, S. Libellule! Thanks for reading!

A phenomenal read start to finish….

More !!

BIG LIKE

You draw a bleak future my friend…

Yes… I do have the same feelings… it doesn’t look good

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. It’s a twisted world for sure. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m not a great fan of now either . how I hanker for those glorious days of yore when steam was king and the world seemed a whole lot slower and simpler .. I whole-heartedly concur .. much of this mess we are now in is down to politicians and in particular their arrogance, ignorance and greed .. In fact, they kill more people each year than flu, cholera, malaria and great white sharks combined .. I just hope your middle name aint Nostradamus .. Anyway, I gotta dash, my bunker needs re-stocking .. Neville 😎👍

I like how you weaved this poem. Like an adult fairy tale. Beautiful

This is no secret… you just proved once and for all you are the Queen of sensual poetry … I humbly kneel under your feet

I love the depth of your interpretations. There are indeed several layers. Your comments are awesome!

xoxo

Hoi hoi
I think you just proeve that with one stroke of your ‘pen’, that you can make
Beautiful
Sensual
And hopeful
Writes.

I love it to bits.

Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
I think you just proved that with one stroke of your ‘pen’, that you can make
Beautiful
Sensual
And hopeful
Writes.

I love it to bits.

Kind regards, Gus

You surprise me sometimes…
💕

यह एक बहुत गहरी कविता है, आप इसे केवल हिंदी में क्यों लिखते हैं?