Well made! I love the rhyming.

This is a lovely poem. Much enjoyed reading it

Naaj

Thank you, Dear PR,

For treating us to such a delightful taste of your captivating poetic voice.
By the vivid imagery, emotive thrum, smooth, flowing lines, and Freestyle rhyme scheme, one can easily tell this is definitely not the first dip of your skillfully dancing pen.

“I know I shall never die even in this
the truth can’t lie, the music I’ve made
is too, immortal” (sighhh!)

With grateful smiles ‘n hugs to Thee! ⁓ Rascal🤗

Bloody brilliant….⭐⭐⭐⭐🙏

I’ve always envied this form of writing cuz my jagged mind refuses to follow suit.
Man oh man this is so fantastic…especially the subject matter
Deep…dark.. just the alley I’d venture down

Much respect

Naaj

Yes, nicely, craftily written..

Mic Drop!

Thank you all for the kind comments.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Just the right amount of dark undertones my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful….absolutely!!

Naaj

Fantastic piece of writing Brenda. Well written and marvelously executed.