That is beautiful. I do not see where you can improve on that.

Ohhh, Adira,
You’ve taken a second bite’a my apple this morning 🍎
First, S i m p a t i c o … now, this!

Welcome back, Dear Poetess À Moi 🌺
With such effulgent sentiments, it’s no wonder the bouquet of your utterances have left a hopeful bard yearning the gentle touch of your satin caress.

Ahhh, that “she” were more truth than fiction, what succulently delightful splendor such a blessing would be.

Thank you, Lady Adira, ever-so warmly, for sharing your lovely presence and encouraging accolades!
Mornin’ hugs to Thee! ⁓ Rascal🖌

I’ve yet to see someone of your caliber when it comes to poetry, Richard. Your professionalism stands out.
A great offering my friend. 🙂

Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Greetings, Adira 🥀

Thank you for your time taken to read and review this rather poignant piece in homage to a failed romance.
The verse you’ve selected to highlight (I think) is the core of this work … good eye and insight in understanding it’s significance.

Your praise inspires me, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

Dear S.
Oddly, this poem made me hopeful. I don’t even know why. Maybe this; I know you worked well and hard to make this poem and while you were doing it, you may have felt it relieve your sorrow and emptiness. Am I wrong? If I’m lucky, when I’m low and have the freedom to write, if I’m not put upon by some duty or demand and I find few words to write, it frees me a bit from my palatable discord. Is this it?
Thanks for writing this.
Jim

This poem gives me a feeling that the writer is tired but will continue their plight on putting words on the page. Nice;))

Powerfully penned, LDF. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is sweet. You capture innocence seen on a young girl from a males pov. Enjoyed this