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Summary:
communal pool of thought
my eyes ease open and they see circles inside the grey
rotating on an unseen axis
frivilous desire to watch them spin higher

when my mind realized they were of an intelligent nature
expanding and retracting with the music of my thoughts
excited, I reach out; they withdrew

settle, child of the dawn, center yourself
that’s when I was fully aware
our form of thinking is square

there’s spherical with a great radius
with such a large scope there was no limits of dreams
when my mind opened I was amazed

they appear very similar to us
but we are limited to what we see
they send waves out over the communal pool of thought
creating more concentric spheres
expanding the depth of the group intellect
sexual encounters are deep not just a touching but a soul searching

 
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    1. To gaze into another’s eyes and feel this way is an awakening. It can go much deeper than just normal intellect and the words to describe it. Your poem is striking in its descriptions. Such an awesome poem and picture to accompany it, Crimsin.

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